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Disgruntled-flash fiction

This is an old piece of flash fiction, based on a twist on a prompt where the idea was to tell a story from the 2nd person POV…

Disgruntled

Bet you never stopped to consider the consequences, did you? Clicking down the hall in sky-high stilettos, got everyone convinced you’re the cat’s meow. Tall and slender, gorgeous in every way. You smile for them, you have time for them. They always get your best.

“Oh, Daniel, I’m sorry I didn’t text you back. Had a late night. Must have slipped my mind.”

Of course.

Your eyes shifting with discomfort, finally looking away to grasp at invisible excuses. “Daniel! I’m sorry, but…I’m not free tonight. Or…any other night.”

You didn’t consider the consequences.

You didn’t think of me.

But you will.

D.Forde May 2013

12 Responses to “Disgruntled-flash fiction”

    • Dyane

      Thx Vashti! I find with a few of these FF pieces there’s so much room to develop them into longer pieces. Maybe I secretly wish it, lol

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    • Dyane

      Thx!
      Lol people have asked for more. Not sure. Was thinking of doing a FF serial with it. Who knows?

      Like

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